Talk:Bessie Smith

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Michela! So mean! Ma Rainey was awesome! Here's a nugget of info:

Ma Rainey tutored Bessie Smith for a period, and then went on to go get her own record deal with Paramount. (It's all on my page for Ma Rainey)

So just don't dis Ma Rainey! --Liv

Great job just try to add a little more-vlad

liv, how did i dis her? michela

Michela - This site is great and you could submit it as it is. You used a tremendous amount of sources! Did you do most of this at home? Some tips: You are missing commas here and there. Try reading it aloud. whenever there is a natural pause, add a comma. I believe you have met all the reqs. Can you rotate the drawing 90 degrees? overall, this is a very thorough page. After some minor edits, you are done! -- Desiree