Talk:Charlie Parker

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Jennifer, please do not delete my work and do not repeat not change the title again -- Roman

I didn't change any titles, what are you talking about. I tried to your work because it seemed to be a little to brief- Jennifer M.

I wanted to ask you if "He went back to New York in April 1947 and formed a quintet. Miles Davis, Duke Jordan, Tommy Potter, Max Roach, and Charlie Parker were all the members of the quintet" happened before or after he went to Chicago? You can move it where you want once you find out where it goes. (you can find this sentence in the Later Music section)- Jennifer M.

Jennifer, for the article link you do not use the actual link there is a way to site them. --Roman

Good job you article is looking great.-vlad

please indicate which section each of you worked on or a if you worked on a section together. - Desiree

I love the drawing of your saxophone. Your content is is sufficient. The heading list for each section needs some work. Think about the audience. It should be a formal tone throughout the piece. - Desiree

Where are your book and article sources? - Desiree

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