Talk:Coleman "Hawk" Hawkins-Master Saxophonist

From Harlem Renaissance

Good job but try to add more about your character-vlad

I tried, but there's not enough information

good start. The redirection is confusing; can you get rid of it? Remember to keep a formal tone throughout your writing. The links that you chose should be described so we know what kinds of link it is going to. To you have your to internal links? Where is your original drawing? Be sure to check flu requirements before Friday. You're also missing some web page sources and in article source in your bibliography. - Desiree