Talk:Duke Ellington

From Harlem Renaissance

                         nerf man 1 (NM1):  sam
                        nerf man 2 (NM2):  jake

Great work, just fix some grammar mistakes and try to add some more about your character. -Vlad

Jake we need to research some things about Duke Ellindton, then do the wiki

-Nerf man 1 (sam)

Cool Sam,I put these sub headers here so we can organises our page. Well of to reacerch.

-Nerf man 2 (Jake) I guess i'm thats what I am, right?

Score! I just got a picture of The Duke. Now I will start writing on his early life.

-Nerf man 2 (Jake) p.s. lets stop putting our name in parenthisis!

I have writen some stuff on Ellingtons life. Add if you wish but you are in charge of his music.

-Nerf man 2

Sam, You have done no work on the website! You have to pull your wait! Start writing!

-Nerf man 2

well nerf man 2 here you go, are you HAPPY ? =^..^=

-NM1

NM2 why are there 2 places talking about the same thing? like in, Early life. It says in the 1st paragraph and the last paragraph " This name was fitting even then. He was tall slim and good looking." what the heck?

-NM1

NM1 Don't dis my writing. I write how I write so lay off. nice edditing though. I will work on the bibliography. You contuniu on his musical carreer and I will do some touch up work.

-NM2

what the? you still did not correct the thing where you are talking about the same thing twice. =^..^=

-NM1

what the heck, you just misspelled continue and career in your sentence But otherwise good job. =^..^=

-NM1

NM2 I think this is good for a 1st draft, t think all we have to do is correct the part where is says the same thing twice, and then were good. =^..^=

-NM1

NM1!, Nice Job, great writing. I will check for my mistake and then if you have some bibliography stuff get it to me and I will post it. We still need an original drawing but that will come. Stop correcting my spelling on this page! I misspell stuff all the time! so Lay off.

-NM2

ha,ha

-NM1 =^..^=

Dessiree, Sam did the intro and music of the Duke. I did the two photos, Life of the Duke and the bibliography.

Great work, Sam & Jake. The main thing that would help your page is editing it for grammar, spelling, punctuation, capitalization. Can you print it out and get help with that, either from a parent or tutor? -- Desiree

I am emailing Jake's drawing soon. - Desiree