Talk:Langston Hughes

From Harlem Renaissance

roman, I changed the head line "beginning of his life" and changed it to "childhood" if you don't like that tel me and we can change it to something we both like.

Lee, Roman isn't your partner, but it is fine that you changed the title i wasn't sure what to call it anyways. I will add on because you wrote a lot. Thank you!! --Samantha h.

Lee, I cant do anymore write now but i will add alot more. Also i tried to find stuff on his writing styles but i found nothing so if you could look that would be great. Thanks! --Samantha h.

Lee, Samantha, Great Page! There's so much info and a lot of references. good work. Just add some pictures and you'll be done --Maddy

Thanks maddy! Samantha I think I might have something on his writing style so I'll see if it works then add it in.--Lee

Great work there's so much but I would really like a few more pictures on this page --maddy

could put up one of his poems please and make the first image a thumbnail --maddy

Yes, add a poem of his! He has so many good ones. -- Desiree

Samantha & Lee, can you indicate which sections you each worked on and which ones you worked on together? -- Desiree

Nice drawing. The main section of info needs to be broken into smaller paragraphs. It's missing commas and I noticed some spelling errors. Print it out and edit it with a pen. -- Desiree

The quotes section is hard to read. Put each quote on a separate line. Also, the bibliography section needs to have the URLs typed out (not just a link) -- Desiree

Good work, overall! You're almost there. -- Desiree