Talk:Marcus Garvey

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Hey- Do I have a partner for this? -Nate

No, sorry I don't think you do, only a couple of people got partners. -Alden

Alright guys, Nate the pictures of Marcus Garvey are lovely but you better get started on some more of the writing. -Alden

You got it! -Nate

Awesome job Nate, way to bulk up the page. It looks great. --Alden

Thanks! I'll kepp it up! -Nate

this is a really nice page! I suggest  picking three of the quotes and explaining  what they mean. It is a nice collection that it has so many of them. - Desiree

A very nice Nate Bernstein production! you went above and beyond many reqs. All the photos you chose are very effective in deepening understanding. Isn't "elocution" a great word! THanks for teaching it to us. THe other word could be "activist." It's really important that the term is defined b/c it can have many different meanings. How does it fit Garvey? There are minor editing errors (ex. "later" instead of "latter"). Can you print it out and thoroughly edit it by Friday? THink also about transitions between sentences. It flows well already, but some transitions could be "tighter" or made more obvious. - Desiree