Talk:Romand Bearden
From Harlem Renaissance
Hey Raffi. I like the format of the first part of your page. It's like a short summary of the main highlights. What I don't understand is th boxed sentence that says someting about a mayors award. I also think that because you have mispelled the name of your artist you should copy all your information onto another page and delete that one. I think you should just do that because there is no way you can fix the name. --Jenny
Jenny is right -- this page needs to be recreated on a page that is spelled correctly. Otherwise, great start, Raffi! And good leadership, Jenny. -- Desiree
Hey Raffi I like the way it turned out but I would probably include a refrences section. -- Jenny
AGAIN - this page needs to be recreated on a page that is spelled correctly! If people are searching for "Romare Bearden" in the search box, they will never find it.
Very informative. Good job, Raffi. I like the realistic drawing that you did. Is there any way to make his art work images bigger. Since he is an artist, you should show off his work. The links need to be written out and described. WHat are they? Any quotes from him? Where are all your sources? 2 books, 2 sites, 1 article? - Desiree
Uhh...Yeah...Well if I could change the title name I would but I would have to; 1. Make a new page. 2. rewrite or copy my work onto the new page. 3. Make sure I don't mess up horribly and have all my work lost in the void of technology. 4. Make a new link from the main page to mine. 5. Make sure the link works. 6. Add my picture to my new page, again! 7. Make sure SOMEBODY doesn't spell my title page incorrectly. 8. Make sure my external links work. 9. If my work was lost I would have to go on the SFPL website, which is the slowest site ever! 10. Make sure that I do all of it in time for the quiz. 11. And do all my other homework...
-Raffi
P.S. Who uses the search box anyways?
The little box that has the award in it can be removed (hopefully)
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That should sum up everything!
-Raffi
