Talk:Zora Neale Hurston

From Harlem Renaissance

Emma. Good start. but your picture doesn't work so you might want to fix that. --Maddy

Jessica, is the candies your image, if so can you fix it. --Emma

Emma, can I erase the images.candies.jpg? i can't find a link to it anywhere. --Jessica

Wow, sorry, I thought it was yours. Yes, I'll fix it. --Jessica

Hey peeps Good job but I will say what I have been saying to everybody else More pics. everybody only has like one so add some --maddy

Emma, I need to check with you about the tenses in our Wiki page. Some are present and some are past. I think we should choose one or the other. --Jessica

umm well Wow, this a great page, good drawing, just keep up the good work --maddy

I like the drawing. Very realistic! - Desiree

Overall, a very thorough job. It could be turned in as it is. Some tips: The sections, esp the Career section, need to be broken into smaller paragraphs. It's difficult for the reader to read such a large block of text. I noticed some minor capitalization and spelling error, but overall, you did well in those areas. - Desiree

Please include a small excerpt from her writing, if you can. THat way, we can see what her writing style is like. - Desiree

Do you only have one book source? WHat about an article? - Desiree