Talk:Art and Music
From Rome
GRADING COMMENTS:
SPECIFIC FEEDBACK:
- For the drawing of the "Ancient Roman Villa," William F should explain that the background is a mosaic! - For the drawing of the "Artist doing his Business," you should explain if it was a tradesman or craftsworker, since those were your vocab words. - The part when you mention Leonardo goes off on a Leonardo tangent. Make sure your wiki page is focused on Ancient Rome. - Your quotes are well-chosen and fit nicely with the theme of the page. - You explained what the vomitorium was, but not why they were used. Why were people throwing up during plays? - 3 kinds = plays, comedy, tragedy, and mime? That's 4 kinds. - How much is "enough" for an actor's salary? - Instead of "uncreative," how about "derivative" or "unoriginal"?
- Desiree
William and Lila, I combined both of your pages per Desiree's request. Hope that's OK. John
Is it possible that we could make the page a narrative style and add a theater section? Im not really groovin the fact lists. Hugs and kisses, Will and Maddy
THANK U SO MUCH I LOVE U William
Hey guys. I took the part about the lyre and moved look at the bottom of the section with all the other insturments ;) Maddy
Sorry about fiddling with ur picture lila just had to make it smaller so we could work around
Did u find a lot of info about roman music or musicians?? well i only found some about the lyre - Alonso
I found out a lot about insturments- maddy
Hello, we just figured out how to do the talky thingy. Anyway, thank you guys for making the pictures smaller, they were too hideous to be that big.
XOXO- Lila By the way, what is with the " I LOVE U"?
THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH FOR PUTTING ON THE LINK TO ARCHITECTURE!!- Lila
The partridge in a pear tree was bonus points. Can you make it smaller?-Lila
Yo peeps i got rid of the second link cause it wasn't working-Maddy
Maddy maddy maddy i dids it i did i did i gots us a table of contents yipee
Yo will U ROCK
Look, please use proper grammar when talking to one another.
-raffi
Hey raffi we do not need proper grammar in the discussion tab
--maddy
if you want good grade you should use proper grammar.
-raffi
NOT IN THE DISCUSSION TAB RAFFI! Stop being a mediater
nice work! i thought you guys did a very good job on your topic. however, i am a bit concerned about your references because you only put 3 instead of 5. please correct me if im mistaking.
-raffi
oops! nvm you have 5 references srry!
-raffi
nice grammar raffi wate to be a hipicrit
i liked your page! Your links in the refrence section don't actually connect to the sites. i also wasnt sure if you had andy notes from the sfpl data base. i liked your quotes! see ya! -lee
like lee said i see no sfpl references and/or links-jim
Arts and music
I adored reading this wiki and i loved the pictures. One thing you need to add is quotes and new vocab words. GREAT WORK!-vlad
This is an incredible wiki page! I love all the pictures and drawings! The quotes are really cool also. I only noticed two things that were missing and please correct me if I am wrong. I did not see three external links that were seperate from your references. Also I did not see any websites from SFPL database to show that you took some notes off of some of their articles. This page is really great and it has a lot of good information! GREAT WORK! - Olivia M.
rilly rilly good in fact grate keep up yhe good work-griffin
This is perfect! Great pictures, well written... just totally awsome! Great job! : ) -Hazel
Amazing, great gob. the only thing wrong is one of the references don't work, other then that it was incredible!-Emma
Nice job. Can you give the definition of "mosaic" and include a picture or link that SHOWS the class what a mosaic is? - Desiree
Im on it Desiree! - Will F [['Link title'Bold text]]
