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i thought the page was really well written overall but you guys are missing a few thing... i didn't see an original drawing. you also need a reference section and one more external link because two of the links go to the same site. you might also want to go over it again for spelling and capitalization. -Michela

I agree with everything Michela says but don't forget the partridge in a pear tree!

?????? what the heck? that was necessary?


Hey you peeps. Your section was well written and composed, and i thought you went thoroughly through everything. But where is your reference section? I also thought you clumped somethings together and made some sentences ramble and go on a little too long. Also, I only saw one quote. Did I miss it? Great job with the vocab words. Overall, fantastico! --Liv

cool, kinda what Michela said about rambling on sentences.. and your scanned picture was missing.. -TEM

made reasores section will make contex section-jake

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