Talk:Economy

From Rome

We'd like to have the words wrap around the pictures.

economy

You guys might want to add some more facts onto some sections little bit more. I did not see any NEW vocabulary words. I like the drawings of the coins though. I like how you described how the currency is really used for, not just money.

Cade

I liked your page but I think you should add a little bit more writting, ther wasn't very much. I also didn't see a quote,but other than that you had pretty much everything. -lee

does "the king is the best" count as a quote? if not you need one more. you might want a separate links section or to incorporate them into the writing, even if you use the same links as the reference section... there are a few spelling and grammar mistakes. i also think you need a few more facts and i didn't see any new vocab words... i really liked your drawing of the coin -Michela

Hey everybody that is grading Economy! I just wanted to say that there are 3 vocabulary words at the bottom of the page and if you press on the number next to it, it'll take you to its meaning at dictionary.com. --Samantha

First off, you need to add a little more writing, some of the ideas come to a sudden stop. Need proof of SFPL visits. I don't think you need a period before "they" in the currrency section. Good Work I liked the coin pictures. - Alden

I think you guys should have more written about the economy of ancient rome. also, where's your quotes? nice refrences!!! Happy holidays!

This page is great! You could maybe add a little writing, but if you don't, I think you'll be okay. The sentences did not always flow, and I think there were a couple punctuation mistakes, but all in all, good work! -Hazel