Talk:Food

From Rome

Theodore Masterson, you should add a little bit more of information about the social issues about food. Nice drawing though. Check for your punctuation, you did not press the space tab after you wrote a sentence. You need a partridge in a pear tree. Cade Miller McLaughlin

Jenny and Ted, there were a few things that you could have added to your page. Some of the sentances didn't have the punctuation that they needed in order for your sentances to flow perfectly. you didn't have any images in thumbnail size and you didn't have any quotes. i also didn't see any links connected to the SFPL Database. There were, however, some very interesting parts as well. Over all, I enjoyed reading your page. Good job! Jessica Raquel Wright

Hey- Nice picture- but there weren't any thumbnail images, quotes, or vocabulary words. You should check your links to make sure they work, because when I tried them they didn't. That and making sure that there are SFPL database links will take care of your reference section. Please run over your work again for spelling, punctuation, grammar, and capitalization errors. -Nate

This is a great page but you guys need thumb nail pics, quotes and vocabulary words. Also a lot of your sentences do not have spaces after the periods. Check spelling and grammar again. -Maddy

Hi Jenny and Ted! So your page was short so maybe you should add some more writting to your page. Your picture was so cute(Jenny). You don't have a book referance. You are the first page that i have corrected that your spelling was perfect. Good job!! --Samantha

Ok guys, you probably need some thumbnail images. Were you planning on adding anything to the "Finger Food" part. You left no space between the periods and the next word. Some of the sentences did not flow well so check again for grammar and punctuation. Also in the picture you spelled porridge wrong. Did you have any article resources sited. Also you need another quote and vocabulary word. I loved your guys picture of all the different foods. - Alden

Great job! There's a couple things missing, like an internal link, thumbnail images, and quotes, though. You might want to recheck the grammar, and maybe punctuation, but overall, it was wonderful! : ) Also, were you going to add finger foods, or skip it? -Hazel ps. great picture, Jenny!

just a qustion why are there rats -griffin