Talk:Military
From Rome
Vlad and Lee, i fixed the errors you made and i would prefer if you did not change what i had previously written. i also corrected your mistake with the weapons. -raffi
Raffi here is somthing from jake you may want to look up some of the definitfitions of the wepons on you page. Puilium is not a sowrd It is a spear.
that was information i got from reliable sources.
Raffi will you please make your pictures smaller it takes up a lot of room. and please tell us the mistakes that you corrected because we might have wanted to use/refrase them. thanks -Lee
working on it! and there arn't any mistakes any more.
Guys were is the roman tower sheild? trust me I know the roman military and there wepons and strategy Please make this more detailed!-Jake
OMg! the tower shield was invented in medivel times the romans had their own version of the tower shield that was more rounded that the later versions, and anyways we arn't even finished working on it yet!
uhh.. the picture of the guys with shields is a bit to close to my picture please change it. -Raffi
who is MOD:Raffi? I thought the dudes name was john
uhhh...whats with the big chicken on the military page?
-Raffi
i thought the plium was for stabing people
-sam
srry sam, guess again.
-raffi
So...there are two things you forgot to capitilize, scutum and tunica. Also, you need two quotes, links to sfpl articles, make some of your sections with the lvl 2 headlines, your external links don't work, and your references are slightly incomplete. Your pictures are great though, and you get an A++ on 2 definitions all those weapons and armor were very fascinating. Pleasure editing your page! -William
william f. or william w.?
thanks for your feedback!
This was a very cool page I learned a lot from. There was one mistake where you added a " instead of '. Also you should make your reference section longer.
- Jennifer.... Good bye
Great job everyone, instead of having two new vocabulary words you guys streched the limit to 15. I couldn't find any quotes on your page maybe I just didn't see them. Maybe you should add an external link to to the page besides the resources. Also, I didn't see a book on your list of sited resources. There were a few things like Hasatati that should be capitalized. Great work I enjoyed reading this page keep up the good work.
- Alden
thanks for your oppinion!
-raffi
I did not see any book resources. There were no external links. I saw a ton of vocabulary words good job. I would like to see some heads like vocabulary. Thanks a lot i learned a lot.
Excellent job guys!! you included lots of vocab and pictures that really improved my learning, if you just added those quotes and library links this could be an excellent page. Happy holidays!!! By the way, where's the partridge in the pear tree?
Good work guys I only have a couple things to say. First you are missing the partridge in the pear tree, second I did not see any quotes and third, don't worry it's positive, you got lots of vocabulary words, go you guys it was outstanding and fun to read.-Emma
guys we need some book refrences who is willig to do that? also who wrote the famous battles and campains section? i think you need to discribe what kind of trouble julius ran into. you might want to make the sentence "they made two general counslers and all of their allies" more clear. for example you could say how they made there allies and who the allies were. -lee
Hey, do we have notes from the SFPL database?
-Raffi
who ever wrote the first paragraph needs to read it over and edit it. one thing that i think should be changed is the part about general garius. he couldnt have been the general the whole entire time rome was an empire. also if you could edit out the first 2 sentences and rewrite them with more info. also the last part about soldiers having to buy there own weapons should be in the weapons part so if you could please copy that into the weapons section that would be great. if you need more suggestions for the first paragraph call me! who wants to make find/add the quotes?-lee
hey lee I added quotes at the very bottom of the roman wiki.-vlad
Guys? the romans fought the elephants they didn't use them.
-MOD:Raffi
raffi give it up your not the moderator you have now power -Jim
jim who r u 2 tell raffi wat 2 do?-Nate
Jim, what if i told you that i work on the website more that anyone else in the class and stay up long after 11PM working on it and correcting errors!
-MOD:Raffi
