Talk:Religion

From Rome

I like how you guys described the different phases of Religion in acient Rome. You also might want to check if you have vocabulary words or met all of requirements. You also need a partridge in a pear tree.

Hey Guys- I thought it was great that you described the three Phases but I'm wondering why Apollo was the only god you went in to detail with. Two vocabulary words were probably there somewhere, but the weren't highlighted and the definition wasn't given or a link to a dictionary was put. The one image is great, but it has no caption and another image is nesescery. There also wasn't a hand drawn picture of something or quotes. Links need to be added, one internally three externally. Check your grammar, spelling, and punctuation once more and you're good to go! -Nate

Great job guys! Your work was very well put together. A couple things to keep in mind though are: you didn't have any scanned image, I coudn't find any quotes, and I didn't see any links, internal or external. There were some vocabulary words in there but there wasn't anything there to explain what they were. You had one small image but you need two, so your halfway there. Just those little touch ups and you're page will be perfect! Excellent work! Jessica Wright

You guys did a good job I like it a lot, but you are missing a few things. You need on origianal drawing, two quotes and a link to someone else's page. I also couldn't find any vocabulary words and you need one one image. please check for spelling grammar and punctuation. A couple things were missing but all in all a good page --Maddy

Hi! So your page was cool, especially how you broke the text up into sections of when it happenend. The you might want to check over your spelling though. Also if you do have articles from sfpl you should lable them because i couldn't tell.--Samantha

Hey, good job here! Make sure you check for grammar and punctiuation. Also, maybe add some links in there and define some vocabulary!- David

what happened to the drawing. and what happened to the two images i see one but not two. everything else is good just put a little bit more work into it.--Noah

Hiya, great work! Religion is a hard subject because it is so vast, and you tackled it well. You might want to double check on capitalization and spelling, though. What happened to that drawn picture? Was the one near the bottom the one you drew? If so, you need one more picture. Also, I didn't find any new vocab words, unless you though names counted? I'm not sure. You seemed to jump from subject to subject, now and a again there would just be one sentence on one whole subject! The writing seemed like you tried to do it all in 5 minutes. Otherwise, great job!! --Liv